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The River Styx

May your soul be washed
down the River Styx,
and find eternal slumber,

In that twilit place
where the dead walk free,
no comfort among their number,

I've been there,
Hell's curs-ed gates,
Where much is known to wander.

In Dante's Wood
that week before,
that day, All Hallow's Eve

You can see that place,
but don't go in,
or you may never leave,

For your soul would be tossed
down the River Styx,
and never again find peace.

-by [Kai Crewger]
-inspired by Revelis, copyright of [polisen]-sama

In the world of Geist the rift between the mortal plane and the dead plane has been discovered. The forest known as “Dante’s Wood” opens the two planes once a year, for one week. By crossing the woods during this time one will find himself in the opposite plane. By entering through the mortal world you will exit into Purgatory. And vice-versa.
Once a person dies they are taken to this land. Purgatory is filled with dark forests, marshes and numerous other lands that normal humans dare not enter. When a person dies they will retain their human form, inside the body of a hulking beast. Furry, animalistic and violent these beasts carry with them the very face and marks of death. They know nothing but instinct. After 500 years of living in this dark foreboding land the beast body dies and the human soul comes to it‘s judgment. By dying in the land of the dead, Heaven or Hell can be achieved. And no one knows what is beyond the death of death.
But all is not lost, for purgatory holds many secrets and is the birthing point of many otherworldly items. The most well know are called the Ghost Triple. No one has yet to acquire them, but their effects are seen. So even the legends can be substantial.

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Morning

Revelis had gone to bed after his pat with Rhea. In fact every did, the atmosphere was heavy. Even if they didn't know what was going on, they felt the cool edges the others were balancing on and were on edge themselves. Revelis laid awake again that night, now finding it difficult to get even remotely comfortable with his human/beast body. I had forgotten...that those Soul Stones also helped me block out the sounds of Purgatory. Revelis heard screams louder that night than he ever had before.

Revelis got up at four and awoke the others. He wanted to get there in the dead of night. He knew that the beasts had good sight, but on the merger of the worlds, the moon was always clouded at night. Also there were more scents in the night, the tide came in, various small animals who had slipped into Purgatory earlier came out. So it would provide even more cover. They loaded up into the van and Revelis set Rhea to the wheel, pointing out the way.

Kizuna suppressed a yawn, leaning her forehead against the window as she stared at the back of Rhea's head. She knew she should prepare herself for what lay ahead, but how could one prepare herself for such a thing?

Risou sat staring at the soul stone upon his wrist, wishing it weren't so necessary to go back, but knowing he couldn't stay forever.

"Never in a thousand years would I have imagined that we could drive into purgatory." Rhea said as she excelerated sightly. "This is almost exciting."

"We're not driving into Purgatory, just to the front of it. The van would make too much noise." Revelis said to her. He then turned around and picked up one of the shotguns he bought and explained how to use it. "I'm assuming, Rhea you know how to shoot one of these?"

"WHAT?!" Rhea yelled, nearly screaming. "Just because I am the way I am doesnt mean I know how to use a shotgun!" she fumed, amost glad to have something to be angry about. "...I do." she finally said.

"Good." Revlis said curtly. He then went back to talking with the others about what to expect in Purgatory. In a short amount of time they were on the edge of Dante's Wood. They clamored out. "Remember, shoot to kill. It's not death here, it's judgement."

They were just about to step in when a shot rang out. None of their own guns were smoking, so they turned around. Behind them about 30 men stood, with twisted faces and ugly desires. The Evil of the Soul Dagger had caught up with them.

Madderik squeaked and scampered behind everyone, trying to remain out of sight. He covered his eyes, falling back on the if-I-can't-see-you-you-can't-see-me strategy.

"Revelis..." Rhea said through her teeth, "Tell me this was planned...."

Risou kept his head down, staring at the men wearily through his bangs. He flicked his wrist, glanced down to check that there were indeed shells loaded, and another twitch of the wrist snapped the barrel in ready position again.

Revelis looked around at the others. They were somewhat frozen in place, and he himself wasn't sure what to do. He decided that he would wait for fire. Then he could make a move.

Anacroth, still tired from having been woken up too early, finally was awake enough to get a grasp on what exactly was happening. He looked down at the shotgun in his hand. Then at Revelis. Then at the enemy. Then again at the shotgun. Screw this, he thought. He pumped the gun and prepared to fire.

Naoko took a step backward. When she had joined these people she never imagined that she'd be in something where people would die. This was getting to be too much.

Kizuna looked down at the gun in hand, wondering briefly if she'd be able to fire at someone. Strangely enough, she didn't feel afraid, although her nerves buzzed and her left hand shook slightly.

The man in the lead raised his own gun and fired at the group. The bullet was aimed at Revelis. He threw his body to the right, taking down Madderik and Risou with him. "Stay here." He told the two of them. He got up in a flash, shouted "fire!" To the others and jumped into up into the largest tree near him. He had to fight from above.

Obediantly, Rhea quickly aimed and shot her rifle, starting first with the strongest looking ones of course.

Kizuna lifted her shotgun as well. She hesitantly used her finger to pull the trigger, but it was not enough force to fire the gun. She took a deep breath and swiftly pulled the trigger, the kickback from the weapon causing her to jerk backwards.

Good Revelis thought from the top of the tree. They know what they're doing Revelis' group was more in Purgatory than the aggressers, so they had more cover from the trees. By the time the beast had leapt five trees across the group of attackers was reduced to 25. He jumped down and landed beside one of them.

Revelis grabbed the man's gun. There was a quick struggle and a few of the others turned outward to see what was happenning. revelis had killed the man and had his gun in less than 2 seconds. He fired the gun right into a man's chest, before the others had a chance to shoot. He jumped back into the tree, still firing.

"Ahhh!" Anacroth screamed as he fired at people. "Revelis! Help me fight! I'm too good-looking to die!"

Risou crouched low, aiming and firing with calm precision. Beads of sweat formed along his brow. They must win this firefight.

Rhea went totally nuts. She fired like crazy, and at the strangest (yet vital) places. She watched Revelis do his thing and sneered. "Showoff..."

"Oh God!" Anacroth screamed as he fired franticaly. "We're all gonna die!" Controlled killling, under his discretion, he could deal with. This kind of insanity had him a little on edge.

The group was dwindling now, down to a mere 15. it was about that time, Naoko stood up to fire herself. When she did one of the attackers took aim at her and connected the bullet in her chest.

Another bullet hit her, and then another. By the time the attackers were down Naoko had been shredded by the bullets, not a single one missed.

A wave of relief washed into the group. They were shaky, but alive. They were happy to be so. Revelis climbed down, and was the first to notice Naoko's broken body floating on a pool of blood.

Kizuna dropped her gun, breathing heavily. She looked around at the others, her eyes finally resting on the body of Naoko. She sucked in her breath sharply, never having seen it happen.

Rhea stared at the body. "Eh, she was weak. Let her die." She turned away, ready to get moving.

Madderik whimpered from under the car, where he had hid to avoid conflict. "We're all going to die." he sniffled, "Dead people go to Purgatory...people who have died...not living..." and he rambled on.

Risou turned his face away from the bloody scene, looking instead at their dead adversaries, who's corpses seemed easier to take in.

Revelis grabbed Rhea's arm. "What did you say?" He shouted at her. Rhea bit her lip. Revelis twisted his expression into anger (which looked even worse, with his half beast face). Disgusted, he threw her to the ground.

Without hesitation he grabbed the Soul Needle and rushed down to Naoko's side, sliding on his kness. He touched her chest and felt a quiet heartbeat. She was still alive. Revelis lifted his arm and shoved an end of the Soul Needle into Naoko's chest.

"Anyone willing to merge with her?" He yelled at the crowd. None answered him.

Angry at the group he lifted his own hand I will save the girl, even if i lose myself . He didn't want to be the one to merge, he didn't want the girl to be haunted by his memories. Tears formed in his animalistic eyes as he slammed his hand downward.

His hand stopped abruptly, but not on the jagged sliver he had expected it to. It was soft,smooth and warm. Blinking in confusion through the tears he saw Kizuna's small body under his shoulder. Out of her hand stood the Soul Needle, a tower above her white skin.

The next second the Needle dissappeared, leaving a hole in Kizuna's hand. A drop of blood formed in it, and in the long moments of anticipation the drop grew until it was flowing, as a river, on the back of her hand.

It was when the first drop of blood hit the ground that a buzzing sound started to whine from Naoko's body. Kizuna's hand began to lift, as did Naoko herself. It was not a matter of standing, but floating to their feet. Their hair rushed outward, as if a wind blew from the center of them. The group backed away in awe. When the body was standing and the two girls looked the most peaceful they started fading away, just like the Needle had. When it looked as if they were lost forever a single girl entered the world, becoming more and more opaque. She was laying on the ground. At last she was full flesh and bone. That's when she stood and said her first words.

"It is finished." The girl said quietly, brilliant white hair hanging into her face. Seferii felt the dewy air on her flesh for the first time, though the feeling felt familiar to her. She took a deep breath, then two.

"Kizuna." Risou said, his voice breaking. He was kneeling where Kizuna had knealt beside Naoko when they had vanished. He stared up at the new person, finding very little similarity between his sister and this being.

Revelis felt an urge to go forward and touch the girl, she was so beautiful, as only one reborn could be. But he dared not to. This moment was too important, and too tender.

"What the holy fuck?" Rhea could barely speak. What the hell was going on? What happened to that Kizuna girl? Just when she was getting to get used to her too. (Though, she would never let anyone know of her dissapointment at the loss of someone she was beginning to care about)

Risou stood, reaching toward his former sister. This was her, this was what she'd become. "Kizuna.."

Seferii looked around. "Perhaps I should explain," she said quitely, a soft smile on her lips. She took Risou's hand. "Your sister sacrificed her soul to save Naoko. Now we are one, Kizuna and Naoko. But I am no longer either, and both. Their souls have formed a new, seperate one, that resides within me, Seferii."

"That's kind of...scary." Madderik whispered, still under the car.

The white-haired girl nodded, her eyes solemn but kind as she continued to grasp Risou's hand in both of hers. "I'm sure it's terribly unsettling, but here I am," She looked directly into Revelis's eyes. "And I believe you have a job to complete."

Revelis just stared with his mouth open. He marveled at Seferii, just minutes ago she was two different girls. He ran the scenen in his head as many times as he could, the dropping blood, the fading out of reality, even the high-pitched buzzing. Finally he had his bearing enough to speak, "Yes..." He paused. "Yes I do."

Rhea had an uneasy feeling, but disregarded it as well as she could. She stormed up to Revelis, fuming. "WHERE THE HELL IS THAT RELIC?!" She screamed, grabbing him by the the sleeve. "What happened to MY soul needle??" She was nearly red in the face after this vocal exhertion.

Revelis looked at her, not angry at all. He was no longer in his stupor, but he was happy. "It's gone Rhea. Back to the afterlife. And it's going to stay there."

"It was never yours," Seferii said carefully, knowing from..well, experience, what Rhea could be like. "You housed it and kept it safe, but it should never have found it's way here, to the mortal realms."

Rhea glowered at Seferii. "How DARE you say something like that to me, you... you BITCH you! It was mine, and I payed large sums of money for it as well! I demand a retribution!"

"Retribution? Would the girl Naoko's life be enough to satisfy you, or would you rather more die while you keep the trinket in your pocket?" Seferii asked, knowing she was walking a dangerous line.

Enraged, Rhea lifted her head to the sky and screamed. Her eyes flared back to Serefii and she whipped out her rifle, pumped it and aimed. NO ONE talked to her that way.

"By keeping the soul needle safe," Seferii continued, ignoring the gun aimed at her. "You saved Naoko, and many others. It'd mar your record, killing me for telling you what you already know."

Rhea could do nothing but glare and make enraged gutteral throat noises at the perfect figure that stood before you. "I dont think anyone would mind if you died. YOU KILLED TWO PEOPLE! Selfish..." She tried to justify herself.

Seferii looked to Revelis. "She has got me there, in a way." She said, a bland smile upon her face.

"No one...died. No souls enter Purgatory." Revelis looked at the others. "We need to go, we have to keep moving, especially now that we're tense and ready to fight." He lead them into Dante's Wood.

All the while, Rhea kept a wary eye to Seferii. She had troubles trusting people like her. No, actually, she had trouble trusting anybody. But, since she had a particular distaste for Seferii already, it seemed best to watch her the most carefully.

After crawling out from under the car and following them, Madderik began to watch the shadows. The trees made him skittish, and the abundance of shadows didn't help matters.

Risou walked slowly behind the group, eyes cast downward. Kizuna was gone..but her soul was here inside Seferii. Even in death, he would not see his sister again. Not that he would ever find her in the depths of Purgatory. "She gave her life.." the words echoed on the walls of his mind. His sister was gone, yet he felt only numbness. Is this more of Purgatory's hold on me? he wondered.

Seferii watched the edges of the forest, conscious of Rhea's eyes boring into her. She hoped she to help as much as she could. It was all she could do, to venerate the good souls that together formed her.

Revelis got in front of the group. His shock had passed, but he was still enchanted by Seferii's transformation. "Okay," he shouted behind the group. "We're about in Purgatory. In and out. Just look for Soul Stones." Her knew they couldn't be missed, they gave off light in the dark world and had a distinct orange haze.

Seferii nodded, bracing herself for the danger of purgatory. She glanced behind her to see how everyone was doing.

Rhea reloaded her gun. She was angry, and she wanted to kill something. This way, she'd be the first in line if anything went wrong. She shot Seferii a glare as they made brief eye contact. Holding her head high, she quickend her pace and caught up with Revelis in her usual spot at the front of the group. "What the hell do we look for? Are they in plain sight or what?" she asked him, trying to reclaim dominance over Seferii's obvious pull on Revelis' attention.

"You'll know when you see them. They light up the ground around them. they have an orange glow." Revelis looked at his rings. "like this" He held them out to Rhea.

Rhea took a good look at the rings and nodded. "I'll be the first to find them then."

"Don't be too hasty." Seferii said quietly. "We don't want to be detected."

"Just stay quiet and don't breath to hard." If you see one don't shoot unless it charges. Purgatory is a large plane, we may not see many beasts..." Revelis said, he was lying, just to keep some of the group calm. He looked back at Madderik.

Rhea glared at Seferii, red hot. "I suggest you do the same. You were so quick to swallow the lives of two innocent girls to make your own, how do we know that you're not about to do something else crazy?!"

Seferii sighed. Rhea was determined to be adverse to her. "I'll try to be more thoughtful in the future." she said with a tinge of sarcasm.

Madderik shuffled along, chewing absentmindedly on his fingernails as he glanced quickly about, trying to see in as many directions at once as possible. He noticed Revelis looking at him, though for what reason he was not sure, so he merely returned the look before continuing to peer around.

Revelis was concerned for Madderik, concerned for the whole group for that fact. They wouldn't all be abkle to cope. He was grateful most of them were predictable. Rhea wasn't.

The woods became more thick and the group was fully in Purgatory. Revelis led the way now, moving aboput ten meters in front of the group to secure their safety. He found a building that was decaying. It's whole front was gone, and the left side was falling away. "Here," Revelis said. "Sit here while I make sure it's safe."

Seferii surveyed the delapitated building, taking in the stillness of the woods. It was amazing how innocent Purgatory could seem, in the quietness of this "nature".

"Safe?" Rhea scoffed, "This looks more dangerous than anything I've seen so far." She eyed the building suspiciously. "How do you know it wont just topple down on top of us?!"

Madderik scampered over to the building, trying to find a place where he could be both unseen and safe from any part of the building that may decide to decay further and crush him.

Revelis moved away from the group, about thirty meters away from the building. The dense wood made it impossible to see them anymore, but he knew if someone screamed he could hear. He started moving in an arc, leaving the building as the center point, making a circle about it. It was when he was about a quarter done he saw a beast. It had it's back to him, it's fur shaking violently as it thrashed and tore a foe apart. revelis could smell the blood, could visualize the tendons being pulled apart just from the sounds. Drink

Risou sat on the whispy grass, his weapon across his lap. His skin had started crawling once they had entered. The muscles on his arms twitched, as if to shake the bugs from his fur. It seemed to make no difference that the beast was still locked inside him. He turned his gaze from the supernatural Seferii and instead looked upon Rhea. Still unfeeling.. He thought. A small, irrational voice inside him accused Rhea for the loss of his sister. He knew some of her harsh words not so long ago had been ones he had tried to deny ever since his reuniting with Kizuna. Maybe that was why he despised them so much..

Slowly the feelings started to rise more and more. He wanted to eat, to drink. Soon he was charging the monster, trying to shed everything that made him human. The beast turned ity's head when he heard the competition moving toward it and it leaped in front of the one trying to steal his drink.

"Isnt this picture perfect," Rhea steamed, tired of the painful silence. "I'm stuck with these of all people. God knows that my museum has gone to HELL since I've been gone--and held hostage. That Revelis! The nerve of that man! Kidnapping me and abandoning me in a strange place after robbing me?! And for what? I never asked for ANY of this shit! Will somebody PLEASE explain to me how any of this makes any fucking sense?" She stamped her foot into the dirt. "Where is that bastard anyway? 'Making sure it's safe', eh? How do we know that that stupid gorilla isnt out there taking a shit, and then leaving us to scrounge up some corpse to devour?!" Rhea was fuming, waving her rifle around. She was ready to shoot anyone who came against her.

Revelis pulled back a fist and landed a punch on the creatures face. The monster flew back a few feet, but took the offensive once gaining his footing again. It ripped it's claws downward and tore off Revelis's shirt. Revelis lept back and avoided the blow and his craving for the drink grew more. This beast was going to die.

2005-05-27 [Nebka]: ah, the cyborg duck. that cool while it lasted. but now the end is near... YES!!

2005-05-27 [Thatz]: 0.0 sounds exciting! and confusing

2005-05-30 [Thatz]: i think kizuna said something to revelis somewhere up there

2005-05-30 [Thatz]: i think kizuna said something to revelis somewhere in there

2005-06-02 [Nebka]: They Probably did but we shall never know. *makes spooky ghost noises*

2005-06-05 [Cina]: EEEEK! Run Kizuna!! The demon wants you!

2005-06-05 [Thatz]: scary! o.o

2005-06-05 [Nebka]: thanks, Personally I don't think its descriptive enough. Did i spell 'delectable' right?

2005-06-06 [rahabim]: Not descriptive enough? Are you kidding? I personally think you overdid it a little. I mean, DAMN!

2005-06-06 [the crazed artist]: tis all good...you did well...I believe you achieved making all of us slightly uncomfortable...

2005-06-06 [Thatz]: so uncomfortable that everyone is afraid to post

2005-06-06 [Nebka]: Evert thing is not alright! I spelled "seemed" with an A. A damn a!!

2005-06-06 [Thatz]: CALM DOWN!

2005-06-06 [Nebka]: but... must... have... all spelling perfect! *curls up into the fedial postion and starts hyberventalating*

2005-06-07 [rahabim]: You also spelled "fetal" wrong. What is wrong with you?

2005-06-07 [Thatz]: *shakes head*

2005-06-07 [Cina]: And its "Hyperventilating" Not "Hyberventalating"

2005-06-07 [kazeumi]: lol... i'll just keep my distance and watch how this all plays out

2005-06-07 [Thatz]: be afraid! be very afraid!

2005-06-07 [Thatz]: naoko had an inner sakura moment

2005-06-07 [Nebka]: *Strikes darth vader pose form Reveng of the sith and screams* NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! ... man that was the worse part of the whole movie.

2005-06-07 [Thatz]: that was! i was ready to leap up and shout: NO! IMPOSTER! ugh...that was so stupid!

2005-06-07 [Nebka]: it really was. I mean it was cool when he started crumpalling every thing around him, but that pose was just too much.

2005-06-07 [Thatz]: *nods*

2005-06-07 [Nebka]: poor ani, he's just a torso.

2005-06-07 [Thatz]: actualy he's dead...why were episode 1-3 done last?

2005-06-07 [Nebka]: First off he's not dead, he's darth vader. then 1-3 were done last because they had already done 4-6 and he needed to have certain special effects to go with it. like computer animation.

2005-06-07 [Thatz]: he dies at the end of #6 so that means he's dead, end of story

2005-06-07 [Jay Ladlehaus]: 1-3 were done last because he didn't have them written.

2005-06-07 [Cina]: I agree, that's what I heard.

2005-06-07 [Jay Ladlehaus]: Indeed. Hence some of the interesting plot holes.

2005-06-07 [Thatz]: ok!

2005-06-07 [rahabim]: Have you people all gone freaking INSANE?1?! This is not the place to discuss "Star Wars"!!

2005-06-07 [Cina]: Hey, don't blame me. I've never even seen Star Wars.

2005-06-07 [Thatz]: *shrugs* i don't even know why Nebka started talking aobut it. why did he?

2005-06-08 [Nebka]: I just wanted to see if people hated vaders pose at the end of three as much as I did. It all kinda went spirlalling out of control after that. but for fun lets retrace our steps as to how we go to star wars.

2005-06-09 [kazeumi]: tee hee... that was a funny part... like "noooooo!!!" ... but what he said before that was funny! it was like... all broken and stuff... heh heh heh... i love dumbness...

2005-06-09 [polisen]: i guess i need to pay more attention down here! totally missed all the star wars stuff

2005-06-16 [Jay Ladlehaus]: here kazeumi, this one's for you: http://vaderfortune.ytmnd.com/ This one too: http://vadercoaster.ytmnd.com/

2005-06-18 [Nebka]: lol, Nice.

2005-06-30 [Nebka]: where did everybody go?!?!

2005-06-30 [Nebka]: Yay Bloodshed rant!!

2005-07-07 [Nebka]: WHERE THE HELL IS EVERYONE!! man I'm bored. And when I'm bored I can't be held responsbile for my characters actions.

2005-07-07 [Jay Ladlehaus]: I'm still watching.

2005-07-07 [rahabim]: *sigh* You must forgive Nebka's impatience. He is an idiot. I have purposely trained him wrong. As a joke.

2005-07-10 [kazeumi]: lol. that must be fun. oh, and "stay calm, dear Nebbie" ............nebbie...*snort hahahaha...*

2005-07-10 [Cina]: *glomps kazeumi* Let's never part again.

2005-07-18 [Nebka]: so this is what happens when "Nebbie" goes to chicago for a week.

2005-07-25 [kazeumi]: yes cina. lets not. except physically, because a forever-glomp would get very annoying.

2005-08-09 [kazeumi]: eehh..... hey, polisen... how exactly are we going to get this RP back on track....?? 0.o

2005-08-09 [polisen]: i'm sorry i'm back everyone, and we'll get going soon enough

2005-08-09 [Nebka]: where did you go?

2005-08-10 [kazeumi]: holy crap... you were actually ON THE COMPUTER polisen? *is sorry she missed you*

2005-08-21 [Kai Crewger]: What's going on? Why is no one posting? I'm missing my favorite RP!

2005-08-22 [Thatz]: because no one is on ever. polisen hasn't been on for the past 9 days last time i checked and Kazeumi can only go on from 9pm to 10pm but hasn't been on lately either.

2005-08-22 [rahabim]: Because everyone's on summer vacation and we're all lazy bums. Once school starts up again this thing should get moving.

2005-08-22 [Kai Crewger]: Ah. Okay. But you guys better move your butts once school starts!

2005-08-22 [rahabim]: In the meantime, you can read my awesome parody which I just started up again (Shameless plug #1)

2005-08-22 [Kai Crewger]: I'll be sure to check it out.

2005-08-22 [Kai Crewger]: hey, rahabim. Do you know what the heck's happened to polisen?

2005-08-22 [rahabim]: No I do not. But if I had to guess I would say that he's been on a quest of some kind or another. Possibly magical.

2005-08-22 [Kai Crewger]: possibly. or he's found himself a life. Maybe he can tell me how to get one.

2005-08-22 [Cina]: He told me he doesn't get on the internet much in summer, as his main purpose is to talk to his friends (who he sees alot during the summer)

2005-08-22 [Kai Crewger]: I see. I remember now, he did get on almost every morning before school

2005-08-23 [kazeumi]: lol ^_^ yep. cina is right.... and none o you worry... this RP is set up for great things, and will be in full in its return once school starts up... the biggest "problem" so far is starting it up again... things kinda went haywireish when Beyrl entered... we shall work it out though!

2005-08-23 [Kai Crewger]: okeeday. lookin forward to it

2005-08-23 [Nebka]: Hey! Don't dump your problems on Me! not my falt you guys don't know how to write a decent story.

2005-08-23 [Thatz]: *stares* i really liked this story and then i joined....my chactacter sucks.....i like her better in The Angel's Tears.

2005-08-23 [rahabim]: (to Nebka) Excuse me? We "don't know how to write a decent story?" Okay first off, your character did complicate things a little when he joined. Second off, we're just trying to have fun with this, not trying to write the next Great American Novel. And third off, where do you get off insulting us like that? I'm offended.

2005-08-23 [Cina]: I..I'm offended as well. The plotline is deeper than you'll find in many an RP. (probably due to the fact that the great Polisen has had it fermenting in his brain to perfection) And it's true, the arrival of Beryl did make things a little off-kilter.

2005-08-23 [Thatz]: [Kai Crewger]:aw, c'mon. Beryl's funny. Or, at least his alter ego is. But you're right, he did sort of complicate things. Looks like you're fighting a losing battle here, Nebbie

2005-08-23 [Kai Crewger]: note, that the above was actually Kai Crewger speaking. Kai is over at Thatz's, and Thatz's computer is screwy

2005-08-23 [Thatz]: my computer's messed up *sigh*

2005-08-24 [Kai Crewger]: no big. now you don't have to worry about it switching accounts on you, since I'm back at my place

2005-08-24 [kazeumi]: i am offended as well. *hmph* i agree with both rahabim and Cina. this story already has deep roots as far as plot goes, and the journey ahead of us is an unscripted skeleton of a story. we rely on each other to make that script as good as possible to follow with the plot line, and also to insure that the "skeleton" is undamaged as much as possible.

2005-08-24 [Cina]: *glomp* Smartie A-chan..=3

2005-08-25 [Kai Crewger]: Hi hi! Kai has started a new RP called Oni Unmei, and is wondering if anyone wants to join. Please check it out! *bows frantically*

2005-08-25 [Nebka]: The plot is fairly decent but it has soooo much more potential then this. Pesonally I think the plot is too stream lined, I'd like to see a bunch of side plots as well. cause at this rate we'll have this story finished by the end of next school year. Deep roots my ass all we've done is met a bunch of people and moved to a new town. where's he competion? wouldn't other people be looking for the soul items as well? and then there's the fact that we haven't run into any normal bad people and stuff, come on this place is basicly a world of sin city. not to mention we have one publicly known beast with us. I'm betting word's should spread real fast to attrach other stuff as well. our of room.

2005-08-25 [Kai Crewger]: I don't think that normal people would even know what the Ghost Triple is, much less know that they're in the normal world. It seems like the only people who can feel that the Triple has skipped worlds are those who have come out of Purgatory, and how many people do you think that can have happened to? And you'll just have to wait for other people to come and meet you. I mean, you only just met up with Risou.

2005-08-25 [Nebka]: Then there the laws of physics. I'd get into that but Beyrl violates them too. All I'm basicly saying is we can do better than this, and I realzie that you guys want too just have fun with it without working your asses off but writting should be fun, and if you don't enjoy it then you logged onto the wrong site.

2005-08-25 [Kai Crewger]: well, you can't really drag the laws of physics into this. I mean, this is a whole different world. Things'll have to be different if rocks can change people from beasts to humans, and if it takes an average of 600 years to actually go to heaven or hell

2005-08-25 [Nebka]: I know that's why i did't

2005-08-25 [Kai Crewger]: okay. I'll give you that battle, but you haven't won the war

2005-08-25 [Nebka]: what war?

2005-08-25 [Kai Crewger]: never mind

2005-08-25 [Thatz]: well if it bugs you so much why don't you quit? and you gotta remember [kazeumi] can only go on for an hour each night.

2005-08-25 [Cina]: I vote Nebka shuts his mouth. Being the young unexperienced RPer that he is, he doesn't know jack squat about a good plot. This story won't be finishing any time soon, as this is only the beginning.

2005-08-25 [Kai Crewger]: yeah, c'mon Nebbie. You've got your own RP to worry about now.

2005-08-25 [Cina]: Secondly, the fact that there are no "normal bad people" in this RP is one of its streaks of brilliance. It shows originality and creativity like nothing I've ever known in another RP. The "bad people" are so overdrawn, and this rp shows situations with bad and good inhabiting one person (a.k.a. Revelis or Risou) and it shows entries into different realms (mental and physical) where the two are in constant battle.

2005-08-25 [Kai Crewger]: alright, that's waay more thinking than I could ever do. Way to go Cina-chan!

2005-08-25 [Cina]: Thirdly, "laws of physics"? If you want realism, then you obviously don't want to rp. [polisen] has drawn the basis from this story from practices and beliefs (purgatory) as well as adding in the supernatural. I fear that you criticise, Nebka, because you don't understand.

2005-08-25 [Thatz]: YAY FOR CINA! are there any rps that abide by the laws of phyiscs besides ones that take place in the really real world?

2005-08-25 [Cina]: Boring ones maybe. XD

2005-08-25 [Kai Crewger]: :P yup yup.

2005-08-25 [Thatz]: ^^ i-i mean with all the anime fans on here you're going to be hard put to find a real life story-rp thing. and isn't he the one possessed by a demon?

2005-08-25 [Kai Crewger]: yeah. that's why he said he didn't want to drag the laws of physics in (but he did anyway).

2005-08-25 [Thatz]: *sigh*

2005-08-25 [Kai Crewger]: Too bad he isn't here to read his chewing out...

2005-08-25 [Cina]: *stews* It just makes me mad when inexperienced kids. I'm not an awesome writer either, but there's rules of creativity and tact involved..

2005-08-25 [Thatz]: it should make sense to readers most of the time and surprise them at the same time but not necessarily be realistic.

2005-08-25 [Kai Crewger]: oh well. I know how you feel. but if you wanna chew him out in his own RP's comments box, the you can check it out at Fall of the Ark Federation. It's already halfway thru the first chapter cuz we started it as kind of a shared story in Sci-fi club at school

2005-08-25 [Cina]: Nah. I don't want to chew him out. I just wanted to correct him, as he obviously didn't understand..

2005-08-25 [Kai Crewger]: okay. you had a really fine rant going there, for a while

2005-08-25 [Nebka]: O.O Wow... I really pissed everyone off huh Cina? First off how would you know just how inexperanced I am? As I understand the strugle between good and evil within the soul of the character I just think it would be comin sense to put (for lack of better term) "bad people" within the story, but I gusses everyone has there own prefreces. Finally, I didn't go nearly as deep in physicsas I could have, but lest just drop that whole part shall we. Oh, and random question of the day: My brother tells me that Buddy has had this plot in his mind for the past three years, why hasn't he done anything to start it till now?

2005-08-25 [Thatz]: because he's only been part of elftown since Dec. 2004

2005-08-26 [rahabim]: God damn... I've never seen so many comments made in a such a short period of time. If only we could get the wiki moving at this speed. On that note, I second the motion that Nebka shuts his mouth.

2005-08-26 [Cina]: This might be a new concept for you, but waiting and perfecting of a story over years actually makes it better. Secondly, this story has had bad people..but this is only the beginning of this RP..things are still being introduced. One of my favorite things about this is that it's not so much struggle against other people, but it's struggles against psyche and elements (like purgatory itself). If you'd read about the soul needle and soul dagger, you'd see that we're still at the beginning, gearing up for what sounds like quite an exciting thing.

2005-08-26 [kazeumi]: fucking hell. Nebka, shut your mouth. we know what we're doing. just because we dont put everything out in the open in THE SECOND/ THIRD CHAPTER doesnt mean that we dont already have anything started. if polisen (and i, i suppose) does not want to reveal anything at this moment, he dosent have to. and besides, knowing wouldnt be very fun, now would it? the world of this rp has a one and a half page bio in itself. it's time for you to stop assuming that you already know everything, and start thinking of ways to make your character Beryl more interesting, because i think that he is the most and nearly only generic thing in this RP. the rest of you must know by now, it has just begun.

2005-08-26 [Cina]: *glomps kazeumi* I lurve you in a friendly, non-sexual way. *cough* Anyways. I have to agree that Beryl does seem..flashy, overdone, but also shallow and wooden. I don't want to be mean, but you could put more time into worrying about your character (who seems to be an overactive Revelis/Anacroth) and let A-chan and Ga-kun do what they do best. Which is this. Because I said so.

2005-08-26 [Cina]: ... . . .. *doesn't mean to be harsh*

2005-08-26 [polisen]: Nebka, look man, I don't rightly care how much you think this story could be improved. First the Triple isn't known by but a few, I agree with Cina your character does just seem to be an amalgam of Anacroth and Revelis. The story is supposed to be neat clean and streamlined, it's just like I wanted it. Your character did disrupt alot of my plans, but I was willing to make it work. After all you're a cool guy. But I won't let you insult this like you did. Everyone's entitled to thier opinion, but you offended most of the players, the people I really care about. We have put ourselves into this deeply, and we're proud of what we have accomplished, because it is ours and no one elses.

2005-08-26 [polisen]: If you want to be an outsider and look at this as an outsider you're free to, but don't expect to be part of this if you can't share the vision. This is my story, I made the world and it's up to me to decide. If you have ideas for a storyline, talk to me personally, don't insult us. This means too much for us. Kazeumi, Cina, Thatz, rahabim, and I. This is ours and we love it. It's the combination of our souls, interacting in a way that we can't normally.

2005-08-26 [kazeumi]: HA! i hath summoned the great and powerful polisen! ah. you're awesome... *basks in polisen's glory*

2005-08-26 [polisen]: So don't make this story into just a story, not since we've breathed life into it. This is us, this is me, get used to it or leave. That's the rules. And if that's unfair, too bad, sometimes it just needs to be that way.

2005-08-26 [Cina]: *nod nod*

2005-08-26 [polisen]: Nebka, I'm going to kill Beryl, I'm sorry but the peace we had just won't work in this RP, but, I still want to play a game or two with you sometime

2005-08-26 [polisen]: Everyone else, thank you, for my absense and for my laziness, school starts and I'll be on more often, promise

2005-08-26 [Nebka]: well done and well said.

2005-08-26 [Nebka]: your right... I hearby give alrights of beyrl over to Polisen to do as he sees fit. This will probably make you all happy but I need to foucus on other stuff too. So knock your self out, just be true to the person you see him as.

2005-08-26 [rahabim]: "Given a choice, whether to run a wiki with a failed and non-compatible character, or to kill that character in hopes of taking a newer throw, a better throw for the wiki's destiny... what was a wiki-boss do to?" --reworded LoK:Defiance quote

2005-08-26 [kazeumi]: a nice quote. that's sorta how i felt... because.... i feel responsible for the wellbeing of this wiki.

2005-08-26 [polisen]: thank you Nebka, that's a class act

2005-08-26 [Nebka]: Thanks but I am going to miss this yaknow? All the rants and raving... ah life was good.

2005-08-26 [Kai Crewger]: wow. that was a very lengthy and long-worded comment battle O_O I tip my hat to you all

2005-08-26 [Nebka]: Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaait!! Before you kill him off and send him into the abyss of unusfull characters let me get in just two quotes!! Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase?!?!?!!?

2005-08-26 [Nebka]: Alert!!! I ask that you all grant me permishion to temperally control all you're characters for beyrls death so that way I can Have it go as I see fit. It the least you could do for as a parting gift, that an go to www.fanfiction.net and search for Chaboose 2814 and review all me and rahbims stories. But Mostly control all your characters so I can have him die in my fashion.

2005-08-26 [rahabim]: (Man, talk about your shameless plugs) Actually, It'd be easier just to click on his link. http://www.fanfiction.net/~caboose2814. (completly optional by the way) Also, I'm not comfortable giving you control of my character. Why not just wait and see how it plays out?

2005-08-26 [Kai Crewger]: I'd go along with rahabim on this one, Neb

2005-08-26 [Kai Crewger]: (and then an enourmous plot hole opens up, and sucks Beryl in, while no one else seems to notice, or register the abscence of their sometime companion...)

2005-08-26 [Thatz]: my character's mine and mine alone

2005-08-26 [Cina]: I agree, I'd like to maintain control of Risou and Kizuna. I think it's up to Polisen to kill Beryl as he sees fit..is what he said..

2005-08-27 [kazeumi]: i agree with cina, actually.... sorry to be such a sap...^^;

2005-08-27 [Cina]: Kazeumi is sap! Let us boil her down to molasses!

2005-08-27 [kazeumi]: ack!

2005-08-27 [Kai Crewger]: yay! pancakes for everybody!

2005-08-27 [Cina]: whoo!

2005-08-27 [kazeumi]: no! not me! i knew i would be used as some sort of sweet and sticky pastry adhesive some day! why?!

2005-08-27 [Cina]: hah! Why quite simply, because you are..my..my glove? ^o^

2005-08-27 [kazeumi]: so i'm a glove AND syrup?!

2005-08-27 [Cina]: yeah..? I dunno. *uses mind powers to compel you to look at the piccie I drew that is on my house*

2005-08-27 [Kai Crewger]: yes, as well as a yummy yummy piece of rock candy ^_^;;;

2005-08-27 [kazeumi]: my, what a great and many things i am! i never knew!! perhaps i should go poke polisen real hard in the shoulder? i will! *moves two seats over and gives him quite a poke*

2005-08-27 [Cina]: You poked the Ga? Why would you poke the Ga! HE MIGHT SHATTER! HE IS NOT A TOY! huh? where am I?

2005-08-27 [Kai Crewger]: yay! I'd poke him too, but unfortunately I am confined in my house. Oh well *cyber poke*

2005-08-27 [kazeumi]: lol... i will be sure to let him know that he is in for another bone shattering poke.

2005-08-27 [Kai Crewger]: hey, I've been wondering, why do you call him ga-kun?

2005-08-27 [Cina]: because..it is his name! His name is Ga-kun!

2005-08-27 [kazeumi]: i gotta get goin

2005-08-27 [Cina]: aww...mrs. kaz..

2005-08-27 [Kai Crewger]: okeeday.

2005-08-27 [rahabim]: (Rahabim's head simply explodes.)

2005-08-27 [Cina]: Eww! Head guts!

2005-08-27 [Kai Crewger]: it's raining!

2005-08-29 [kazeumi]: it's raining? is it soup?? *opens mouth and eats the brainieness... and gets ebola.*

2005-08-29 [Cina]: Eww--ebola-fied Kazeumi!?

2005-08-29 [kazeumi]: Oui! ^.6 see! my eye fell out!

2005-08-29 [Cina]: hee hee! Put it back in before it catches cold, silly! ^_^

2005-08-29 [kazeumi]: okay okay....

2005-08-29 [Kai Crewger]: hihi, strangelings. Shameless plugs, 1 and 2, deploy! Kai has started an RP, Oni Unmei, and there's the link if you wanna check it out. Kai has also set up another RP, Fall of the Ark Federation, and that one is in dire need of more RP-ers. NOTE, the second one does belong to Nebka, I just set it up. Thank you!

2005-09-01 [Kai Crewger]: why is nothing happening?!?

2005-09-01 [Cina]: Our fearless leader hasn't been around much, I've been told.

2005-09-01 [Kai Crewger]: but he's alive! I know he is! I've seen him for myself!

2005-09-01 [Cina]: lol! He said he wouldn't be getting on much this week until..tonight, actually. That's what he told me on like, friday of last week *shrug*

2005-09-01 [Kai Crewger]: wait, tonight? okay... I'm wondering whether I should plague his message box with mail asking where he's been...

2005-09-02 [polisen]: well one of us (out of A-chan and I) have to pay for the dates (lol I'm kiddin') I've been at work

2005-09-02 [Thatz]: i'm beginning to hate jobs. grrrr.

2005-09-02 [Cina]: me too. I hope I never have to have one. Strawberry: Hah. Good one Cina. You'll be workin' til your 65.

2005-09-03 [Thatz]: in college as soon as I get an assistantship i'm gonna quit my job

2005-09-03 [Nebka]: elol, I've waited for this moment my intire life! WEEEEEEEEEEE! (He shouts happily over rahabims courpse.)

2005-09-03 [Kai Crewger]: strangeness abounds in this wiki page... o.0

2005-09-03 [Kai Crewger]: NEB! Don't you dare leave without posting something on Fall of the Ark Federation! If you don't, I'll do it for you!

2005-09-03 [Kai Crewger]: too late, he's gone -_-;; *sigh*

2005-09-06 [Kai Crewger]: more advertising! A new rp, Uprising. Check it out. it looks like it'll be good, even though it just barely started.

2005-09-06 [kazeumi]: from polisen on kazeumi's login: hey, everyone go into the lounge for breakfast Revelis will appear last, therefore I need to wait for you all to eat, thank you

2005-09-06 [Cina]: Aye aye, cap'n Kazeumi! I-I mean Polisen..I mean..0.o

2005-09-06 [Kai Crewger]: hey, rahabim, when you see him next, could you chew out you brother for me? Tell him that he needs to pay attention to his RP or I'm gonna change the passwords.

2005-09-06 [Nebka]: I told you, I have a life!!

2005-09-07 [Kai Crewger]: not a very good one, otherwise you wouldn't be on elftown at all!!

2005-09-07 [Cina]: come now, elftown is my life!

2005-09-07 [Kai Crewger]: nonono, I'm talking to Nebbie up there.

2005-09-07 [Cina]: I know, but you said that his life wasn't a good one if he was on elftown at all. Elftown is my life, and it's a wonderful one! (realizes she's a geek)

2005-09-07 [Kai Crewger]: yeah, me too. *geekiness abounds* but geeks are cool, cuz no one messes with geeks, unless they want the geekiness to rub off on them. (normal) people fear what they don't understand. also, I was talking about his life outside of elftown...

2005-09-07 [Kai Crewger]: he is clearly a cool-person-wannabe, and is trying to deny his inner geek.

2005-09-07 [Cina]: lol. There's a little geek inside of all of us, screaming (in a cracked voice) to get out

2005-09-07 [Thatz]: *claps for Kai*

2005-09-07 [Kai Crewger]: thank you, thank you, *bows*

2005-09-07 [Thatz]: it's only partly centered

2005-09-07 [Kai Crewger]: okeeday, if any of you finds that you like the poem better if it's just hugging the left side, then I have no problem with that. feel free to change it.

2005-09-07 [Thatz]: there ya go

2005-09-09 [Nebka]: You pepople are mean. :*(. I'm not a geek I'm a Nerd!! I am almost anything but a cool person.

2005-09-09 [Cina]: geek, nerd, they're all just labels.

2005-09-09 [Kai Crewger]: actually, technically geeks are different than nerds. but, it is a very very fine line, so I just call myself a geek-nerd.

2005-09-09 [Cina]: nah. I think they're both the same. I mean, since they're really just used as insults, does it matter?

2005-09-09 [Kai Crewger]: hey, I call myself a geek (and a nerd) and I'm proud of it. who wants to hang out with all those preps/jocks anyway?

2005-09-09 [Cina]: lol, I know what you mean. I think I'm the "weirdo" type, but I was talking about how other people refer the name, not those who use it for themselves.

2005-09-09 [Kai Crewger]: true, true, *strokes imaginary goatee*

2005-09-09 [Nebka]: My mind is filled with distruping images.

2005-09-09 [Thatz]: i'm a total geek. the difference mainly is that nerds are people who act smart while geeks might not be smart or might just be incable of acting smart evem though they are smart.

2005-09-09 [Kai Crewger]: it's disturbing images, although it may disrupt your lunch...

2005-09-09 [Kai Crewger]: here be another forgotten story that Kai has converted into RP form and is now going around and advertising because she has nothing better to do. History of Infinity. I don't mind if it's just me talking to myself, but I figured it would be more interesting if other people joined.